A Complete Success by Colette Paul is a collection of fourteen stories set in Glasgow, giving the reader a sense of the reality of life. Paul writes about ordinary happenings that appear to go unnoticed but impact individuals' lives.
The first three stories feature the same girlfriend and boyfriend. For me at first I was a little perplexed, as it felt like a novel. Nonetheless, I found that Paul’s writing style has a lovely easy flow. The ease of reading doesn’t reduce the impact of the writing. In "Mine," the third story, the girlfriend is struggling with becoming a new mother and her boyfriend not wanting her to have the baby at first: "I know it’s not fair to remind him, and I don’t want to keep reminding myself, but sometimes I can’t help it. It’s there, on the edge of my consciousness, like a shoebox on top of a wardrobe." This story made me share the newness of motherhood, the traumatic birth experience, the disorientation of the unknown and the girlfriend’s need for her own mother.
Once I’d read the first three stories I slowed down, read a story, considered it, then continued. As I strolled through these stories I caught glimpses of myself, present and past, recognised individuals, uncovered an understanding of self, life, humans. Paul enables the reader to delve into themselves, and how life shapes people. "Marrakesh" made me question how grief affects people and consider: is anybody really who they present as? Paul takes the reader on a journey through the different stages of life, how age and experience impact actions.
Paul is skilled at drawing the reader into a story, building up tension and emotion, taking the reader from laughing out loud to the depths of sadness and everything in between. The opening lines of "Best Friends" lead into a story about the complexities of friendship, and what effects differing upbringings and being away from home have on finding identity, love and a place in society. "I meet Josh on the first day of university, when he sits beside me in the lecture theatre. He admires my hair, which is platted round my head like Heidi, and I admire his jacket. It’s patchy brown suede, a with sheepskin collar, and he tells me he found it in the street."
"The Tutor" is a story of youth versus age and education. In this story, Paul demonstrates the strong atmosphere and humour of her writing: "the boy loomed up suddenly behind me like a mushroom." "It was a freakishly hot evening, and the tutor’s wife answered the door wearing a white tunic and white trousers, like someone dressing for their first day in a cult." In "Jeffrey," Paul writes powerfully of endings and being on the edge of new beginnings: "Her arms still ached with the ghost of his weight."
A Complete Success is a beautiful book from the design of the cover to the placement of stories. Paul demonstrates the power of the short story, and the skill of writing a story while allowing the reader room to pause, think and find a conclusion for themselves.
Sally has an MA Creative Writing from the University of Leicester. She gains inspiration from old photographs, history, childhood memories, and is inspired by writers Sandra Cisneros, Deborah Morgan, Liz Berry and Emily Dickinson. She has short stories and poetry published in various online publications including The Ink Pantry, AnotherNorth, Roi Faineant Press.
Sally lives in the countryside.







